LEAVE HERE
KNOWING
by
Elizabeth Oakes
Wind
Publications, 2013
ISBN:
9781936138524
69
pages
As mentioned in my interview with Elizabeth Oakes, I first met
her several years ago at a reading and panel discussion held as part of the
Kentucky Women Writers Conference in Lexington, Kentucky, but I was introduced
to her poetry in 2009 through her intriguing collection, The Luminescence of All Things Emily.
—Karen
L. George
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Review of Elizabeth Oakes' Leave Here
Knowing
Elizabeth
Oakes first volume of poetry, The Farmgirl Poems, (Pearl Editions, 2005), which
portrayed her childhood on a rural Kentucky farm, won the 2004 Pearl Poetry Prize. The Luminescence of All Things Emily (Wind
Publications, 2009) re-imagined poet Emily Dickinson's life through the
viewpoints of her sister Vinnie, her brother Austin, his lover Mabel, his wife Sue and
people employed in the Dickinson household. In Mercy in the New World (Wind
Publications, 2011) Oakes recreated
the world of a 17th century Puritan woman through persona poems in the
voice of Mercy, a composite of poet Anne Bradstreet's two
sisters. Oakes, who holds a Ph.D from Vanderbilt University, co-founded and co-edited the Kentucky Feminist
Writers Series, and taught Shakespeare and women's poetry for
over twenty years. She lives with her artist husband, John, in Bowling Green,
Kentucky and Sedona, Arizona, and blogs on art and writing at etherealpub.com.
In her fourth poetry collection, Leave
Here Knowing, Oakes sets out on a quest to discover more about herself as
both an earthly and spiritual being in her current incarnation by exploring
other places, other times, and other selves. The title is taken from Chandogya
Upanishad translated by Eknath Easwaran, part of the texts which form the basis of the Hindu religion: "Those
who leave here knowing who they are and what they truly desire have freedom
everywhere, both in this world and in the next."
Leave Here Knowing is divided
into six sections. In the first, titled "On my Mother's Side," Oakes
writes about those she terms in the Preface as her "soul mothers," which
for her includes not only her birth mother, but historical, literary, Biblical,
and mythological mothers such as Eve, Mary the mother of Jesus, Kali, Sappho,
Anne Yale Hopkins, Emily Dickinson, and Virginia Woolf. In the book's first
poem, an ekphrastic one inspired by a Thomas Trevelyn watercolor called
"The Sixth Day of Creation," Oakes says:
Eve reaches into that sun,
toward a word. It is so right,that beginning world, her rising,
a word in the sun. It is so right.
She is reaching for it now.
This
beginning poem contains the colors "amber," "blue,"
"gold," and "green." Color and art are important motifs continued
throughout the book, as are imagination, creation, words and writing, language,
voice and silence. The beautiful, haunting image of Eve "in the
green" reaching into the sun for a word is a surprising turn in the poem
that suggests Eve as the mother of language, as giving birth to language, as perhaps
the original Muse, further suggested by the word "uttered" in the
poem's title. Oakes emphasizes the significance of having a voice
("reaching for a word") by her masterful use of sound in this poem,
as in the repeated vowels sounds (assonance) in "Birds curl,"
"Adam lies asleep. Eve rises," "Eve reaches," and the
repeated consonant sounds (alliteration) in "diluted / trees and grass,
its fish and ocean," "his side into the sun," as well as the
internal rhyme created by a phrase like "toward a word." The poem continually uses the "s"
sound, known as one of the fricative consonant sounds, which creates a sizzling
sensation in the poem that beautifully echoes the energy of creation. Oakes
creates another effective turn in the poem's last line: "She is reaching
for it now." Eve isn't staying put in the past, but is brought forward into
the present by Oakes' use of the word "now," which foreshadows one of
the major themes of this collection: how time and being are fluid, as well as
the importance of connection, being connected to each other and the natural
world. This poem also uses contrasting words and ideas that will be repeated: "falling"
and "rising," just one example that will begin to establish another
of the book's themes: the dualities of existence. "Birds,"
"wings," "angels," "sun," "ocean," and
"water" appear in this poem for the first time, but they will
reappear throughout the collection.
Another poem of the first section, "To Sappho,"
carries the thread of women having a voice and the opposite of "all the
church fathers / and all the puritans / and all the patriarchs / and all the
witch hunters" trying to silence women. In the following poem "In
Memoriam," 17th century Anne Yale Hopkins' writing has not survived, so
Oakes suggests we honor her and other women silenced through the years by
reserving a blank page in every anthology, ending the poem with the moving
lines "This page is for you, / so they cannot silence your silence."
This theme continues into the third section poem "The Survivors Speak,"
which references the female holocaust during the European witch craze.
The second section of Leave Here Knowing, comprised
of only one poem titled the same as the section, "Being Born Again and
Again," speaks to one of the book's central themes— the soul being reincarnated countless times.
The poem ends with an allusion to the "river of Lethe" which in Greek
mythology made you forget your past life.
The
third section titled "Images of Lives" is a series of persona poems
in which Oakes imagines other selves. In "My Kimono of Earth and Air"
she is a Japanese woman who has "breasts like teacups, / hips two silk
fans" who "feeds babies / with mouths / like roses"; in
"Love Song, from the Sinagua Petroglyphs" a woman from a pre-Columbia
tribe that resided in what is now Arizona; and in "Runes Reader" a
diviner whose "name was something / like Herutha, and she / shook destiny
in her hands." The poem "The Daughter I'd Seen Before" continues
the theme of birth, cycles of life, connection, and reincarnation:
...She sucks her thumb, making
a circle of herself, flows into herself,
as we flow into each other, making a circle
of ourselves.
The poem also repeats the words
"circle," "moon," and "womb," images that repeat
throughout the book, along with "rings," "bowls,"
"nests," and "nesting dolls," suggesting birth, nurturing,
connection. In this section there are also repeated uses of other circular shapes:
eyes and mouths, and images of growth and cycles— seeds, berries, gardens, and forests. Water, an image of birth and the
source of all life appears in "Once you Were the Riverboat Captain"
and "Yes," the final poem of the third section. In "Yes"
there are two characters, two voices, an "I," a "you," and
a "we." The two are riding horses "over the steppes," which
suggests to me places like Eastern Europe or Central Asia, perhaps back in the
13th or 14th century during the Mongolian Empire, but it could just as easily
refer to Patagonia, South America, the sagebrush steppe in Nevada, or the
prairie in the Great Plains. I suspect Oakes left it intentionally unspecific
to go along with the theme of fluidity of time and place. I found this poem to
be central to the collection, not only because of its physical place in the collection,
but in its themes and repeated motifs, and its mastery of form and layered
meaning. It echoes the theme of duality by using paired contrasting words as in
"We ride early and late" and "male and female." The couplet
form of this poem also echoes the idea of duality, of the Ying and Yang that
makes up a complete whole, and of the two that ride together in this poem. The idea of steppes is also mirrored in the
couplets lines, the first line markedly longer than the second line, and it
creates a sense of tension and motion in the poem, further created by the fact
that the first line of each couplet, except for the first, is a back and forth
between the I and the you: "I
say..." and "You say..." and then in the middle of the poem the
order reverses with "You say.." followed by "I say..." This
central couplet has line lengths almost the same, breaking the previous and
following pattern of unequal line lengths.
This creates a sense of the "I" and "you" becoming
equal which mirrors the meaning of the lines: "You say we may be each
other / I say this being human is a mirage." The poem repeats the idea of
a spiritual journey or quest, the idea of connection of self to other selves
and the whole of consciousness. There are all kinds of motion, duality, and
fluidity in the poem. They are crossing a river, they seem to be becoming each
other, and on the verge of changing from earthly to spiritual form, ending this
life to eventually take on another form.
The poem ends with the lines "You say next time we will be male and
female / I say yes" which suggest that in their next life they might be
more balanced, more of the male and female mixed equally and the
"yes" gives such a sense of joy and completion to the poem, saying
"yes" to this life and death and the next life, to the mystery and
discovery of each life to come. The fact that Oakes uses no punctuation in the
poem further emphasizes the motif of fluidity, of reincarnation, a continual
circle of lives. This last poem of the section is a perfect transition to the
next section, called "Bardo: What It May Be Like," because it is
about transition from one phase of existence to the next.
Oakes introduces this fourth section by defining Bardo as: "Tibetan Buddhist word
for our existence between lives, that nebulous place and time that can be
described only by simile, metaphor, analogy, not remembered." The poems in
this section are imaginings of what that in-between experience is like when the
soul leaves one body and re-incarnates into another. In the first poem,
"From Non-duality to Duality," she describes Bardo as "a place
you'll have to cross...you'll need equipment — ropes / for a bridge, spikes to anchor them," and later "It's
made by the same movement / as the glaciers, as the sun / across your kitchen
floor." Oakes effectively uses concrete images to describe something abstract,
so that it comes alive through the reader's senses. This poem also emphasizes
the fluidity of this in-between space and place by the use of contrasting words
and ideas: "tropics" and "ice," "glaciers" and
"sun." In the next poem, "Two Pisces Leave Bardo: An
Allegory," she describes two souls leaving Bardo (pictured as an ocean),
approaching the moment of re-incarnation as "Land rises with the next
waves. / We swim toward it. // Like some leviathan, life / rushes at us, opens
its maw." This poem of transition to the next life is full of motion, there's
the repeated motif of opposites: falling and flying, rising and diving, still
and drifting, sky and ocean, land and ocean. In "Jean Allegory" the
taking on of a new body, the beginning of a new incarnation is compared to the
way jeans feel when "washed and left / in the dryer too long." In the
poem "At the Motel Samsara" Oakes accompanies the moment of reincarnation,
of being reborn, with more of the round images we've seen in earlier
poems: "The moon a pearl, a navel,
a hypnotist's / watch swinging, a car with one headlight."
Section five, "Pilgrimage" Glastonbury,
England, July 2008," explores the idea of going on physical pilgrimages
and the idea of connecting to places that resonate with us. Doors are an
important repeated image in this section, an image of transition, of opening to
transformation, to what we can discover on the other side. In the first poem,
"Door to St. John's Church," there is a key to the door that's
"worn / from a thousand years of locking and unlocking," again an
image of opposites, and ends with an image of transformation—the poet transforms the photo so that
"The door / warms, becomes as alive / as a tree still with its sap."
This section is filled with images of angels and flying, repeated references to
being a tourist or pilgrim, and details of the churches' architecture and
sculptures, echoing the ekphrastic poems seen throughout the book.
The last section,
"Where Soul Meets Body," embodies living fully in the current moment,
fully inhabiting this cross-section of body and soul. Its beginning poem,
"Always in the Medieval Sky," another ekphrastic one, talks of angels
omnipresent in medieval paintings and describes how they are painted as "the
way gold, which is / of this earth, is needed to paint / angels, which are
not" — emphasizing the
duality of existence. The poem, "Body and Soul," is divided into two
parts, "Leaving the Body" and "Coming Back," again this
theme of duality and transformation. Oakes describes the leaving with a paradoxical
pairing of opposites — "I
was leaving and left, / more than myself and less," and the return with
hauntingly beautiful images — "Silence,
then a sound / like insects in a haiku / My soul enfolded // Lao-Tzu's ten
thousand / things unfolded like / a child's pop-up book." The final poem
of the book, "Being Born," envisions a soul newly incarnated in a
body, full of questions:
What map guided me?What road did I travel?
On what ocean sail?
What river follow?
Who was rowing?
Steering? Guiding?The book ends, as it began, creating a perfect circle, in a moment of creation, a soul beginning another journey in a new body, another self in another place. The poem ends with the soul asking "What is this wonderful / place I've come to...and then set / about to learn its lessons."
Elizabeth Oakes' Leave Here Knowing is
a collection that travels through varied times and places, is experienced through
diverse characters from birth to death to Bardo and rebirth, and viewed through
the lens of many works of art. Yet the poems speak to each other through repeated
imagery patterns and recurrent themes of birth, death, transformation, connection,
quest, duality, and fluidity to create a pleasing sense of wholeness. I left
Oakes' poems feeling as if I'd been on an enchanted voyage, led by a master and
yet left to discover for myself, with the assurance that this was a journey
barely beginning.
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Karen George lives in Northern Kentucky. Since she retired from
computer programming to write full-time, she has enjoyed traveling to historic
river towns, mountain country, and her first European trip. Her
chapbook, Into the Heartland, was released by Finishing
Line Press in 2011, and her chapbook, Inner Passage, is forthcoming from Red
Bird Chapbooks. You can
find her work in Memoir, The Louisville Review, Tupelo
Press 30/30 Website,
Wind, Border
Crossing, Permafrost, and Adanna.
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